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Script Revision
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We are re-writing and editing parts of our script so that it makes more sense as to what the plot of the film is and leaves more suspense for viewers to want to view the rest of the film. Initial Script for Voiceover: Dear Elena, About a year ago when I left for the army, I was so upset to have to leave my best friend behind. I couldn't stop thinking about you and all of our memories together. One day in combat we were unexpectedly attacked and I got hurt causing severe injuries to my head and brain causing our memories to slowly fade away. I still have enough memories of you to remember how much you mean to me but I know they will soon be gone. I just want you to know I'm sorry. Help me remember. Love, Ryder Revision: Dear Elena, I wish I could be here for you when you read this, to help you understand. And even though I may be physically, i know it won't be the same. I'm so sorry. I know you were waiting for me to come bac...
Re-shoot & Re-Casting
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My group has decided to re-shoot the entire film with a different male lead, instead of re-doing just some clips. We want to improve the plot and continuity of the film. We are keeping the female lead, but using a different male lead. We are are changing the role of the male lead from being her best friend to her boyfriend/fiance. Our new male role, Ian Bain, is apart of the military and has the uniforms from it which we can utilize in our film as it follows a boy who got hurt in combat who came home. It will also help our voice over make sense as we can have the male read his own letter instead of the inner monologue of the girl. The reason for this change in casting is because of the availability of our last male lead as well as how we want to keep it on a serious note and these two leads have more chemistry to be able to follow the original script of the two being in love rather than dating. Also the last version of the film, following the memories taking place in it, the cast wor...